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A Fly for a Flower


A Fly  for a Flower
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版权: Foozi Saad (foozi) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 624 W: 0 N: 993] (4864)
流派: 风景
媒介: 彩色
拍摄时间: 2009-08-07
种类: 自然
相机: Nikon D80, Sigma 105mm F2.8 DG MACRO
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
提交时间: 2009-10-21 16:15
已访问: 3202
观点: 52
[Note Guidelines] 艺术家笔记
Whilw looking at the white flower suddenly this bee dived into it.
I just managwd this single shot before he flew again.
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Boa noit Foozi,
Nice shot from white/yellow flower receiving a sharp bee. Good POV and colors.
TFS,
Raimundo

Salam Foozi: This is a superb bee shot perched on this white flower. The petals are amazing and the shallow focus is dreamy. Diagonal placement of the bee fits nicely in a balanced framing. Best regards. Jusni

Bee in action you are lucky to capture it in such a wonderful pose.We can imagine the speed with which you must have captured it.very sharp and colorful capture.tfs

Salam Foozi,

Lovely shot here with beautiful details and sharpness on offer. Good DOF with interesting central composition with the bee in the frame. Great capture of light penetrating through the translucent wings of the bee, Although you have gone for slight under exposure here- it works well to preserve the highlights that normally OE white petals against darker inner flower structures. Wonder how this shot would have looked had you chosen Spot metering. May have revealed more details of the bee's eyes with some mild fill in flash. Just a suggestion. Nice shot though my friend and thank you fir sharing this wonderful shot. Have a great day!

cheers,

Dilshan

Hi, Foozi. Good timing my friend.Nice capture of this beautiful flower and the bee from a interesting angle with good depth of field, colors and excellent sharpness. Cheers

Lovely shot Great colours and pov
warm regards
David

Hi Foozi,
Great shot with contrasted colors and good light.Well timed shot and well composed details
TFS
Selahattin E

Hi MF Foozi,

A beautiful and excellent close-up capture of a hoverfly with warm colours and delightful composition.
TFS and cheers,

Bayram

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2009-10-21 21:46]

dear Foozi,
this delicate gradation from white to yellow on petals is very graceful.
the figure of flower is very attractive for us and of course for this bee. the pretty little bee fits well it.
a little dark tone of colors is also fits this tender atmosphere very well.
thank you,
Akihisa

Hi Foozi
Wonderful macro shot
Great clarity, details and colors
Thanks
Burak

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27557)
  • [2009-10-21 23:01]

Hi Foozi,
great macro and beautiful tittle.I liked white frame also.Congratulations.Necla.

Hello Luis,

we are to be discussed here around our and other photos and to get suggestions and to exchange opinions.

I find to the picture something is simply absent certain.

If one sees against it your picture - Autum in Chelo - a difference like day and night

Greeting

Bonjour Foozi.
Un bon cadrage qui met en valeur la mouche qui se trouve au centre de la fleur.
La douceur des couleurs est bien adapt閑, mais supporterait encore un peu plus de luminosit.
Les d閠ails sont aussi tr鑣 bons et permettent une bonne observation.
Bonne journ閑.
Urs

Hi Foozi,

I don't know how I missed this nice macro!
I like th great white dahlia with a bee as a bonus :) The sharpness is crisp and the colors are perfect. The POV and DOF are very well done. the central part of the flower, is indeed interesting to have a kind of extra amount of light...superb.

very well done, my friend.

best,
paras

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4442 W: 640 N: 9630] (55118)
  • [2009-10-22 4:08]

Hi Foozi

I likethe layered wedding cake appearnace of the white flower. Good shadow detail with excellent dof & sharpness. The central bee is a distinct bonus. Tfs!

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  • Tanjicka Gold Star Critiquer [C: 871 W: 0 N: 807] (4207)
  • [2009-10-22 10:53]

Hello Foozi,

Excellent macro shot and nice composition.
Great clarity, sharpness, lightness and very natural colors.

Best regards,
Tatjana

P. S. Sorry, out of my point-budget today :( Hope you won't mind

Hi Foozi!
Wonderful macro,lovely soft colours and clarity,
fine lighting and details!Suitable title!
Regards and tfs
Kostas

Hello Foozi,

The petals of the white flower are delightfully captured, showing shade, waxy textures and curled form, without any evidence of oe.
The insect, although having a lovely reflection on its wings, does seem a little underexposed. I suppose that's easy to do when trying to prevent oe on the petals.

Have a good w/e,
Bev :-)

Ol Foozi

Linda, linda macro...gosto das cores,
dos detalhes, da luz qu muito bonita.
O inseto bem no centro da flor ficou
interessante.
Parab閚s!
GA
Vera.

Ciao Foozi, beautiful hoverfly on a lovely flower, good natural colors and excellent sharpness, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hi Foozi
Stunning macro capture,good fokus,lovely colours and great contrast.
TFS
Regards
Andrzej

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1583 W: 40 N: 3488] (13942)
  • [2009-11-25 7:08]

HI Foozi
Not an easy one to get but you managed the flower well with its detailed petals being so sharp while the bee kept buzzing not co operating as well but you did great.
Dot

Salam Foozi,
Very beautiful macro again vith good focus and details.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

Hi Foozi,
Very nice close-up and macro picture,
great colors and light,
well presented and composed.
very well done.
Michel

Hello Foozi! Amazing bee, wonderful flower, excellent capture. Good sharpness, very good contrast. Original take. Well done!

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2009-12-03 1:37]

Hello,

Avec l'insecte sur la fleur, quelle finesse, ce blan, le coeur jaune, grandiose macro, une emrveille.

Bravo et amiti

Nicou

Ciao Foozui


It is a lovely fly and a beautiful photograph!
I notice the sought after silky-crisp texture in the wings, and the fine pattern is well reproduced...
A balanced composition, DoF spot on isolates the insect nicely!
Lovely flowers too...

Greetings,

Sergio

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