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boat and clouds

boat and clouds
版权: nestor abrazado (smoke) Silver Note Writer [C: 1 W: 0 N: 13] (251)
流派: 风景
媒介: 彩色
拍摄时间: 2011-12-28
种类: 自然
相机: Canon EOS 1000D Rebel XS
Exposure: f/9.5, 1/8 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
提交时间: 2015-04-14 0:47
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taken during our honeymoon..a clear sky with just a wisp of clouds during sunset
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Hi Nestor

Nice and sharp with attractive colours. But the composition is not very good. The top half of the sky could be removed because most of it lacks any detail and interest. boat and horizon is too low in the image and the horizon isn't level. I've looked at your other photos and I know you can do better than this.

Hi Nestor, have to agree with Bob, although from the angle of the beach in the left corner I'm guessing you tried to keep that out as the boat is close to shore. Unless it was really cluttered I dont think it would have hurt too much leaving the shoreline in. Hope you dont mind me doing a quick ws? Fiona

Just noticed you dont have the ws link active.

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