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boat and sunset 2

boat and sunset 2
版权: nestor abrazado (smoke) Silver Note Writer [C: 1 W: 0 N: 13] (251)
流派: 风景
媒介: 彩色
拍摄时间: 2011-12-28
种类: Transportation
相机: Canon EOS 1000D Rebel XS
Exposure: f/19, 4 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
提交时间: 2015-04-17 1:11
已访问: 1233
观点: 4
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another boat, another sunset
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Hi Nestor

I'm sorry, but the top two thirds of this pictiure is empty space with little or no interest.

Hello Nestor,

I like the pic. nice color and boat. I think just a little be crop from the sky would be better. however this time we would not see the moon. anyway nice pic. thanks


Nice thought in taking both the Sun and the Moon in single shot. In my opinion it would be effective if you increase some contrast in this.


Not sure what obstacles were to your left, but if you'd have moved to the left, you could have had a more frame filling image with a lot more interest.

The change in viewpoint would have made the boat larger in the frame, and you would also have captured the clouds in the background instead of an expanse of empty sky.

Not a great deal of colour here either if i'm to be honest. A little bit of EV would have given a little more saturation to the shot. As it is, the colours are a little washed out.

The biggest failure I see here though is the tilt on the horizon.

Sorry Nestor,


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