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The Shed

The Shed
版权: Robert Smith (bobsmith) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 507 W: 361 N: 126] (1886)
流派: 风景
媒介: 彩色
拍摄时间: 2017-01-15
种类: Architecture
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
提交时间: 2017-01-21 11:33
已访问: 1197
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[Note Guidelines] 艺术家笔记
I don't know why but I'm attracted to scenes that contain a contrast of light and shade. Some may say that they need human content, but, personally, I don't think that's necessary in this one. but I am biased.

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Lovely old shed with a well weathered door and roof. I think the tree on the right do well as a supper but I think there is too much 'empty' space on the left. A tad more contrast may also help to give life to a dull brattish day.

I tried to show what I would like too see in a workshop. Hope you don't mind.

I can agree with Andrei's remarks, as they are very pertinent.
But I must consider that it was the way it is that was conceived by you and is a beautiful image, very nice and delicate.

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  • jods Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 87] (508)
  • [2017-01-22 6:00]

Bonjour Bob,

J'aime toujours autant ce genre de composition 脿 laquelle vous savez d茅gagez une atmosph猫re magique, f茅erique!
M锚me sans personne sur cette sc猫ne, on imagine chacun ce qui pourrait s'y passer!

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 804 W: 26 N: 783] (8781)
  • [2017-01-22 16:01]

Hi Bob,
I liked the subject and composition but felt the image needed more brightness and contrast, so I copied it to PS on my PC and found that the coloursI were spot-on. I have found this on several photos I have posted on TL

Hello Bob,
Think this is a really good image, you have caught the
stillness and dignity of that old building.

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